Saturday, June 13, 2009
Crossed 50
Temperatures are soaring here, yday it crossed 50 Degree C( But officially it was well below fifty)...
I have never been used to such high temperatures in my life till now( Many firsts ). Thank God i have shaved my head....
Its been horrible, no need to take bath also these dayz:)
"Mute Spectator"
Weather is hot, without doubt
You follow, whichever route
It's difficult, even for a sprout
It's like an extended drought
Whenever you go out
It's like having a bout
My body has become a clout
As if Sun is playing with its boot
Also Sun is playing its flute
howmuch ever u hoot
damage done can't be compute
My appeal has become mute
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It has good Rhythm.
ReplyDeleteIt speaks about Reality in a blatant way.
But I think Poems have to be a bit subtle and indirect.
Good Try.Hope you write more poems and become master of it.
The Mumbai heat
ReplyDeletewil beat
ur place neat
Its so sultry here u keep sweating n sweating....ayyo i miss blore!!